Hi Rayhan. You chose a difficult comment to improve. I like how you have given your own positive, thoughtful and helpful feedback to Dani on behalf of Zane. As you look at your comment, what do you think would improve it? I think it would be easier to read with some more full stops and capital letters to show where each sentence starts and ends. I hope you enjoyed adding more ideas to your blog!
Hi Rayhan. You chose a difficult comment to improve. I like how you have given your own positive, thoughtful and helpful feedback to Dani on behalf of Zane. As you look at your comment, what do you think would improve it? I think it would be easier to read with some more full stops and capital letters to show where each sentence starts and ends. I hope you enjoyed adding more ideas to your blog!
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